By the end of the day, the tree behind the house
will drop all of its leaves—pools gather beneath it now

In this pile, you are fishing line: in this pile, I am nightfall and you
looking out to see it (somewhere has never been where you are).
I will lift this leaf from its place on the walk.
It has no special meaning, a handshake, really.
Your hands are simple tools.
We are the pieces inside them you are sprinkling into anthills.
The ends of my fingers are dreams.
I thought I should tell you that
in case you felt the tiny dollops
of their embrace.


20 comments:
Being embraced by dreams is a wonderful thought!!
pat
thanks for the comment
i agree
if only they could issue out hugs
I like this, :)
very cool!
thanks
take care
jel
thanks for visiting
glad you liked the piece
don't hesitate to come by again
this is very nice... i like it.
polona
thanks for dropping by
glad you liked the piece
"the ends of my fingers are dreams" - wonderful
cheers
floots
thanks
always good to have you drop by
I think this is another lovely posting the picture is fantastic
plus ultra
thanks
glad you like the photo too
it's actually a photo my sister took a few years ago. she was going to toss it and i wouldnt let her.
so now i own it
This is lovely; you have quite a way with words and images.
twitches
thanks for stopping by
glad you like the piece
I love the imagery and it sparks a snippet of a poem I heard in 5th grade by Archibald McLeash...the Ars Poetic.
Leaves pooling and finger tips made of dreams. Wonderful!
anon
thank you
and such a compliment to be likened to mcleash's ars poetica
this is beautiful. incredibly so.
tammy
thank you
for the kind words
glad you liked the piece
Since your poems are few and far between maybe we can convince you to entertain us with some prose?
andrea
lol
well, i would be posting more often, but life has been full.
been trying to commit more time to me here
i miss me here
ive considered posting old work just to post, have in fact, but life is less full now
but i havent posted prose in a while so i may
dont mean to keep you at bay
images r beautiful.
nI(mo).nI
thanks
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