October 22, 2006

POOH STICKS IN THE GARDENS AT BLENHEIM PALACE


On three, our hands spring open, our fingers webbing out but touching nothing as we let the twigs go--the ones we picked from the ground so carefully, whose lines we admired, testing their weight, true in our open palms, their grey bark no longer hiding the green of their youth.



And in this brief moment, before we turn and race to the other side of this narrow bridge, we lean. We lean, chests heaving against the cold railing, to push our twig through first on the other side just inches ahead of the others, but still ahead, still worth having carried this far after all, our heads bobbing like the heavy blooms of sunflowers, our bodies reaching up to the very ends of our toes, our tender green desires pressing, pressing, pressing hard against the odds.

18 comments:

(Ni)mo.Ni said...

i love that part in winnie-the-pooh where he and piglet play the stick race game! adorably sweet.

camera shy said...

(ni)mo.ni

it is quite possible that my siblings and i are the only ones to play poohsticks in the royal gardens.

(in on the far left in the picture)

Pat Paulk said...

I have learned a new game. I'm probably the only person in the world that didn't know what "poohsticks" was, but I didn't. Now I do. Fantastic poem!!! Who won??

camera shy said...

pat

i won
hands down

i played at every bridge

did you not read the a. a. milne winnie the pooh books? pooh and piglet play.

Prmod Bafna said...

Aaaah i guess i didn't know about "poohsticks" either.. sounds fun though!! And a very nicely descriptive poem too!!

camera shy said...

prmod

well i do believe ive played enough pooh sticks for us all

each and every bridge
my entire childhood

feel free to count it as your own

polona said...

i, too, didn't know about poohsticks until a short while ago when floots posted a poem about the game. i really enjoyed this one.

camera shy said...

polona

floots posted one too?
i shall have to read his take on the whimsy of poohsticks

Anon said...

I never played Pooh sticks as a child, you and Floots are the ones I learned about from and reading this post - I feel like I missed out. (grin) Beautifully done, sir!

camera shy said...

anon

i missed floots's pooh sticks piece
i will have to ask him to let me read it

floots said...

enjoyed this
(win or lose - good games are always worth a visit) :)
i think my poem was a very short/haiku-type piece but i'll try to find it and email it to you
cheers

cdpmr said...

R&R love pooh sticks. Every time we take a walk along the Fox River we stop and play a couple of rounds. Nicely done.

camera shy said...

floots

thanks. i look forward to reading it. thanks.

camera shy said...

cdpmr

it must be done. have you ever shown them the picture i posted here?

i still play sometimes

Jon Cox said...

ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!!

camera shy said...

jon

thanks
glad you liked the piece

Anonymous said...

You are one heck of a talented writer! That was such a delight to read. Keep at it!

camera shy said...

irene

thanks for the kind words