Very simple poem but the verses are very thought provoking....When the world gives give the bitter (sour, unsweeten) things, transformed them by experiencing and going through these "lemons" and you will be the better and more wholesome person because of these things......I can think of James Chapter 1 of the Bible!!!
i enjoy the vivid imagery (and accompanying image) of this one.
good to see you on your recent visit to my blog. i'm back in mn & readjusting to the idea of winter...trying to make light of the situation, like you said.
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I love this!! Great ending!!
pat
thanks
it was a fun one to write
i am partial to the ending myself
it was just one of those
"what if" realizations that turned into a poetic opportunity
Excellent metaphor. It's good to see your work. Sorry I haven't been around.
I think I will have to make this my official protocol for what has already been occuring...
EOTR
always good to have you stop by
johnb
lol
glad to be of assistance
I agree 100%.
anon
thanks
who needs all state, right?
these hands are good to me
How they miss their levitation at the many ends of the lemon tree.
antonym
thanks for stopping by
too tied to the limbs themselves
dropping
is never easy
oh, i like this one! great attitude!
polona
thanks
your latest haiku
is simply wonderful
This feeds my investigation into personal pride. The connections between us all. So thank you.
I am totally out of lemons at the moment too. A situation I rarely allow to occur. And so in need of lemony goodness :-(
jvs
i would suggest trying to wring the picture
but
i dont know if you are using a mac or a pc
Very simple poem but the verses are very thought provoking....When the world gives give the bitter (sour, unsweeten) things, transformed them by experiencing and going through these "lemons" and you will be the better and more wholesome person because of these things......I can think of James Chapter 1 of the Bible!!!
plus ultra
interesting alliance
can't say that i've been likened to bibilical text before. or, at least no one has said it to me before.
i like the comparison.
thank you
Wow. Fun.
Our hands are such significant parts of ourselves. I wish there were more poems about hands.
river
the poem before this one also has hands in it
the one im working on now has hands in it
i hope that helps a little
great poem
great way to deal with life
cheers
floots
thanks for stopping by
thanks for the comments
sweet.
GoGo
okay now there is irony
im assuming you mean the poem and not the content of the poem?
hello there.
i enjoy the vivid imagery (and accompanying image) of this one.
good to see you on your recent visit to my blog. i'm back in mn & readjusting to the idea of winter...trying to make light of the situation, like you said.
evelyn
thanks for visiting
winter
winter
winter
arrgghh
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