(on looking at Edward Hopper’s painting, Nighthawks)
Nightfall is in for the evening,

resting on everything with its heavy shadows,
tired now from holding them for so long
but for the occasional thumb print behind you here,
tired now from lifting every heavy wave
upon its back there.
And leaning into tall buildings has never once been easy.
It’s certain no one here would see it differently.
For now, darkness hangs an arm across our shoulders.
We each bow a little beneath its weight.
We are that much closer to our cups because of it,
that much closer to the ground beneath us.
We will meet up again then.
There.
For now, we sit and drink,
leaning back a little sometimes
to uncrease the curl in the slopes of our spines
or lean our faces in to the glow of electric light,
the way we might hold our hands before a fire,
the way we might break the water’s surface one last time
before slipping down,
far beneath the waves
with the shadow of night
beneath our heels even then.


14 comments:
the sky has felt like this here, today, toward evening. a haze of heat, wind, fire...heavy and thick with humanity...and nature..lovely piece Ralph
cape
thanks for visiting
you say fire
is this common for where you are?
i remember there being fires there
before
yes it's typical for this time of year..a.k.a "fire season"
Fynbos, which is our natural vegetation is largely driven by fire...reseeding and rejuvenation is cycled by it. (much like the forests up there, i think!)
Unfortunately most fires are not started naturally so they need to be contained.
Where fires begin naturally in older vegetation (10 years or older) they are left to burn so that they can do their job!
There was a biggish one in Tygerberg nature reserve yesterday. I live in what used to be a fire standby house so i can see them all from here. It's most surreal.
capegirl
wow. i can only image what that must be like. you should sell tickets.
id pay
you could wear a firemarshal's hat an everything.
yes it does sound a bit like our forest fires on the west coast, but i am very far a way from those. we did have some fires up here, in MN last year or a couple of years ago now, but that sort of thing isnt normal for us as much as it is on the coast, at least not at the same magnitude.
Sweet as per usual, Camera Shy.
This is especially nice:
"to uncrease the curl in the slopes of our spines
or lean our faces in to the glow of electric light"
sophie t.
thanks
a line i am fond of myself
Yep, I like the uncreasing of curl in the spine too!! "Darkness hangs an arm across our shoulders" ain't shabby either. Good poem CS!!
pat
thanks for thekind words
That is one of those paintings that elicit endless streams of pensiveness…I see that you have so succumbed, and to the side of the articulately pleasing of course.
johnb
yes
i was dragged in and nearly dragged under
always loved the painting and this more than does it justice
floots
thank you
yes, a wonderful work by a wondrful artist
hoppers work always gets less credit than it deserves in my opinion
I had that print framed for a friend who reminded of the guy in the suit...come to find that he had that same print on a mug in his apt. Unusual since I had never seen it before..and here he now has two of them.
again beautfil prose. soothing.
gina
thanks for the kind words
and thanks for stopping by
great story by the way. too funny. you should llok into more of hopper's work. an artist worth spending time with.
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