November 18, 2006

NIGHTHAWKS
(on looking at Edward Hopper’s painting, Nighthawks)

Nightfall is in for the evening,
resting on everything with its heavy shadows,

tired now from holding them for so long
but for the occasional thumb print behind you here,

tired now from lifting every heavy wave
upon its back there.

And leaning into tall buildings has never once been easy.
It’s certain no one here would see it differently.

For now, darkness hangs an arm across our shoulders.
We each bow a little beneath its weight.

We are that much closer to our cups because of it,
that much closer to the ground beneath us.

We will meet up again then.
There.

For now, we sit and drink,
leaning back a little sometimes

to uncrease the curl in the slopes of our spines
or lean our faces in to the glow of electric light,

the way we might hold our hands before a fire,
the way we might break the water’s surface one last time

before slipping down,
far beneath the waves

with the shadow of night
beneath our heels even then.

14 comments:

capegirl said...

the sky has felt like this here, today, toward evening. a haze of heat, wind, fire...heavy and thick with humanity...and nature..lovely piece Ralph

camera shy said...

cape

thanks for visiting
you say fire

is this common for where you are?
i remember there being fires there
before

capegirl said...

yes it's typical for this time of year..a.k.a "fire season"

Fynbos, which is our natural vegetation is largely driven by fire...reseeding and rejuvenation is cycled by it. (much like the forests up there, i think!)

Unfortunately most fires are not started naturally so they need to be contained.

Where fires begin naturally in older vegetation (10 years or older) they are left to burn so that they can do their job!

There was a biggish one in Tygerberg nature reserve yesterday. I live in what used to be a fire standby house so i can see them all from here. It's most surreal.

camera shy said...

capegirl

wow. i can only image what that must be like. you should sell tickets.

id pay

you could wear a firemarshal's hat an everything.

yes it does sound a bit like our forest fires on the west coast, but i am very far a way from those. we did have some fires up here, in MN last year or a couple of years ago now, but that sort of thing isnt normal for us as much as it is on the coast, at least not at the same magnitude.

Sophie T. Mishap said...

Sweet as per usual, Camera Shy.

This is especially nice:

"to uncrease the curl in the slopes of our spines
or lean our faces in to the glow of electric light"

camera shy said...

sophie t.

thanks
a line i am fond of myself

Pat Paulk said...

Yep, I like the uncreasing of curl in the spine too!! "Darkness hangs an arm across our shoulders" ain't shabby either. Good poem CS!!

camera shy said...

pat

thanks for thekind words

JohnB said...

That is one of those paintings that elicit endless streams of pensiveness…I see that you have so succumbed, and to the side of the articulately pleasing of course.

camera shy said...

johnb

yes
i was dragged in and nearly dragged under

floots said...

always loved the painting and this more than does it justice

camera shy said...

floots

thank you
yes, a wonderful work by a wondrful artist

hoppers work always gets less credit than it deserves in my opinion

Gina said...

I had that print framed for a friend who reminded of the guy in the suit...come to find that he had that same print on a mug in his apt. Unusual since I had never seen it before..and here he now has two of them.

again beautfil prose. soothing.

camera shy said...

gina

thanks for the kind words
and thanks for stopping by

great story by the way. too funny. you should llok into more of hopper's work. an artist worth spending time with.