thanks for the high praise all based on a conversation i really overheard
the girls all sat talking about the boys they wre dating (the girls were college age) and they started out all excited talking about how cute the guys were and how bad they were and slowly they lost their excitement and they talked of how bad they boys treated them and how miserable they were in the relationship, how they felt abused and used until finally they stopped talking altogether and fell silent for a very long time.
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very short and very powerful. yes indeed. indeed.
cape
thanks
glad you like the piece
when should we look for your work again?
oh what a wonderful journal this is! i need to link to you right away!
thanks for stopping by and viewing my son's artwork. he is ten and has autism.
meander
thanks for stopping by
i really liked your site
your sons work is priceless
love that final image of voices scarred by life/love
great observation
cheers
Yes, I agree, we're all carrying around with us past scars. Love can really screw around with your head unfortunately :(
floots
thanks
it always shows in our voivces
the damage we carry
medusa
yes
it is hard to devote to other and really truly mean it without picking up ther woundes too.
very effective. love it!
ah, the scars we're wearing...
polona
my own scars
rear their ugly heads
even when i see them coming
and i try to keep them down
so hard to allow ourselves to be vulnerable and find strength in that
Conversations I try to steer clear of... Great little poem CS!!
pat
im assuming you meant for you personaly
yes, easier to hear than to have
Concisely brilliant and powerful indeed! Love the last line lots too!
"filling their beautiful voices with scars" :)
prmod
thanks for the high praise
all based on a conversation i really overheard
the girls all sat talking about the boys they wre dating (the girls were college age) and they started out all excited talking about how cute the guys were and how bad they were and slowly they lost their excitement and they talked of how bad they boys treated them and how miserable they were in the relationship, how they felt abused and used until finally they stopped talking altogether and fell silent for a very long time.
been there, done that myself...usually followed by a bit of blues and punk music...not necessarily in that order.
johnb
ahhhh
the blues
funny how its genre title defines a feeling.
how many other art forms can make that claim?
Old girls, not young girls I hope...?
andrea
they were college students
early twenties
still not old enough yet to keep from playing loves fool
Wow. You have a wonderful way of stringing your words together and rendering them more meaningful with perfect images. =)
Glad to have stumbled upon your lovely blog. Keep at it! ;p
irene
thanks kindly
glad you stopped by
drop by again soon
This is excellent. Short, but it says much. Good work.
Not that I'm much of a critic, but I enjoyed it!
little sentences that pack a punch...
my first visit here, came through sophie's blog...
hope u'll visit delhidreams someday :)
dorky dad
thanks for dropping by
a fellow minnesotan i see
how is new brighton?
adi
thanks for stopping by
good to have you here
i just topped by dehlidreams
you are doing some nice work
ill stop by again later to take a longer look
Camera, you sent this beauty to the Brim, so thank you. Indeed, it was a kick ass verse.
clifford
thanks for stopping by and thanks for the kind review
Good one.
sigmund
thanks
Why am i thinking Sex and the City here :) Lovely
motorama
hmmm
that i dont know the answer to
ive never watched the show
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