January 14, 2007

JFK DREAMT OF SATOMI DOGWOOD

That is all it takes is one shot.
And all that crimson spills out,
staining each leafy green brocade.

Forensics can tell us the velocity
of a lacerating blow to the flesh
by the size, the shape of blood marks.

Trajectory is measured with strings, pulled like webs,
that span the distance, the angle the blood has traveled
to mark its place upon any wall or blade of grass in any field--even this one.

A bullet through the back of your head
will spray the blood, each droplet spreading out
into thin wires, into tiny telegraphs of how you died.

Maybe, you were running across an open field just then.
It does not matter. Your blood will say it all. It will cry out after you cannot
saying listen, listen, let me tell you what I know.

19 comments:

Pat Paulk said...

If one bullet tells all that, what do three tell. Wow!! The blood always cries out. Good poem!!

digitalphotography101 said...

Yup..agree very good poem to read..

camera shy said...

-->pat

i know. it really is a lot simpler than certain parties made it out to be. i recently revisted oliver stones JFK film. twice actually. such a powerful film.


-->digital

welcome, and thanks.

polona said...

powerful write. somewhat disturbing, but well done!

camera shy said...

polona

it is a bit morbid i suppose, the subject matter. but a constant consideration and a necessary one

floots said...

beautifully done
love the title
(a whole lot better than csi) :)

camera shy said...

floots

lol

too funny. thanks for the laugh.
and thanks for the kind words

MB said...

I like the pairing with the photo.

[a} said...

your words are powerful!

camera shy said...

mb

thank you
finding just the right image of satomi dogwood was difficult. it needed to have a figuritive element to it, how could i express the horrific ballet of this event

camera shy said...

[a}

thank you
thanks fro dropping by
i vistied with your site briefly
great aesthetic

i will spend more time with content soon.

Jane said...

a pretty poem

camera shy said...

jane

thanks

and

good to see you here

{illyria} said...

that comment by floots made me laugh out loud, too. ;)

camera shy said...

illyria

that floots is a clever fellow
not doubt

Sophie T. Mishap said...

Hey I really like this. :)

camera shy said...

sophie

thank you
thanks for dropping by

Gina said...

I read your post and got the shivers...

Reminds me of my poem I wrote:

your hammer's good
it's headed south
keeps your secret
without a mouth.

the ground is hard
the ground is cold
tells many stories
as I am told.

where you have walked
how much you weigh
cover your clues
because one day.

the smallest fragment
the tiniest hair
well get you life
to this i'll swear.

you make your bed
you dig your grave
and to your guilt
you'll be a slave

Think this out
while you sit in the slammer
He carried the cross
but you bore the hammer.

He took the nails
you pounded in
Forgive them Father
They know not thier sin.

Three days later
The ground will attest
The man was seen walking
along with the rest.

A carpenter by trade
he knew about hammers
He knows about you
his lost little lamb-er.

He stands at the door
Speaks truth and won't stammer
Be the best friend
to the man with the hammer.


PS Turns out my sister friend was named Chris Lamber and he was in prison and kind of not doin that well so she thought I must have wrote it for him. Who knew?

camera shy said...

gina

glad to have moved you
good to know my work
is meaningful in that way

thanks for sharing your work too.